Thursday, 14 January 2016

Second Draft

I have now completed my second draft which I have now published on Youtube. I am now going to focus on my final touches and make my trailer look as professional as I can.



2 comments:

  1. I really like this trailer, i think it includes a lot of suspense and makes me want to watch the film. However i did notice that the music differentiates when the voice over is playing, which i think is restricting it from reaching its full potential.

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  2. I find this quite confusing,i am not really sure about the story line? maybe you could include more clips and a voice over to make it clearer

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